hey jon this is a great stationery. I think everything is working cohesively and shows thats your really pushing yourself. I like how you have an asymmetrical balance going on with the positive and negative space. Its looking very professional. I saw the other options that you had for your stationery and i believe that you chose the strongest one. It was a good idea adding additional elements which shows that your thinking outside the box and that your pushing yourself. continue to do that. everythings looking very impressive.
browsing for ideas and saw this...interesting idea, especially in regards to your mailer. take a look!http://www.behance.net/Gallery/KOKTEBEL-Wine-Card/145190
Thanks for the link sarah! That is totally cool! Dammit, why didn't I think of that!
Thanks for the nice words Jamall!