Reworking the Copy

I became so focused on getting the logistics of the piece itself to function with a sufficient degree of efficacy (folds, cuts, glue, perforations, etc.), that I had not allocated as much time to the informational layout on the inside. After giving it some thoughtful consideration and receiving insightful advice, here is what I have thus far:

Here is a photo of an actual wooden wine crate. This is what I am trying to emulate.